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piwi

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Piwi: la corde au cou -nouvelle version
« on: January 27, 2014, 08:25:44 PM »
Voila la nouvelle version de mon numéro : La corde au cou !
Il y a encore quelques modifications à apporter mais j'ai vraiment pris en compte les critiques que vous avez proposées sur l’ancienne version .

Partagez, critiquez, aimez ! mais surtout prenez du plaisir à regarder


Here is the new version of my issue: rope around his neck!
There are still some modifications but I really took into account the criticisms that you have proposed on the old version.

Share, criticize, like! but above all have fun watching


http://youtu.be/QNEJ1b7kn9k

the_vik_vh

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Re: Piwi: la corde au cou -nouvelle version
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2014, 08:47:10 PM »
I loved the video and I don't really have anything to say about the act where there should be something better. I like how you start really slow an then very creative tricks. Those things on the floor add a nice effect when they get hit by the sticks. Are those flower leaves or something? Very nice act

-Viktor

Icebox

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Re: Piwi: la corde au cou -nouvelle version
« Reply #2 on: January 29, 2014, 02:28:02 PM »
Pacing, lighting, music and tricks all came together really well. Only thing I didn't like was the two or so minutes of you sitting on the bench at the start, but I have a feeling I'd have appreciated it a little more if I were fluent in French ;)

Also, 6:15 is gorgeous, well done :)

wgm

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Re: Piwi: la corde au cou -nouvelle version
« Reply #3 on: January 29, 2014, 05:42:23 PM »
Super nice stuff. Are you in circus school?

piwi

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Re: Piwi: la corde au cou -nouvelle version
« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2014, 07:59:03 PM »
Thank you everyone! I do not speak very good English ... I was still a little understood :) yes for two minutes debuts there are words in french that explains a little show, Vicktor I did not understand: (Otherwise I am a circus school in Namur (Belgium), I did not have the ages for suppérieures schools ...

 

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