Author Topic: Watch The Gap  (Read 4684 times)

Catjar

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Watch The Gap
« on: December 28, 2009, 10:59:26 PM »
Here's my first actually good video (in my opinion)
I'm not the greatest.... but that's okay.

Watch The Gap

Toddyupa

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2009, 11:32:19 PM »
nice editing, and a nice slackwhip at 2:10.
BUT WHERE IS THE TRIPOD!?!! :-D It's too shaky, the least you can do (like i did in my first) is find things to put the camera in.
pretentious 12 year old

Catjar

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2009, 11:55:27 PM »
BUT WHERE IS THE TRIPOD!?!! :-D It's too shaky, the least you can do (like i did in my first) is find things to pust the camera in.

Yeah the shaky shots are because of the heavy winds during filming on one of the days, originally we were using a tripod but then one of the legs just fell off.

Toddyupa

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2009, 01:24:39 AM »
oh, that's too bad. :P If I were you, i probably would have ditched the video. But maybe i would think differently in your position.

EDIT: what's that editing sytem
pretentious 12 year old

hOOk3r

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2010, 08:31:24 PM »
well,i'm going to be clear,there are some nice tricks there(the slack at 2:10,a body combo at 0:50...) but all of them are "stained" with some dirty copied tricks.
In my opinion you are able to do a nice video,maybe it'd be good wait some time to have more tricks or something similar... ;)

Paino

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2010, 08:45:13 PM »
i see great potential in you

Ben.

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2010, 09:09:59 PM »
Good choice on the music front and I liked a few of your tricks quite a lot.
I quite liked the editing too.

mathéo

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2010, 09:22:04 PM »
yes, that's okay ^^

Catjar

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #8 on: January 11, 2010, 01:13:12 AM »
Thanks everybody.  I just started feeling like nobody commented because nobody liked it.  now I feel better about the video

And yeah, hooker, I realize there's not so many mega-original trick ideas in there.  And I plan on waiting quite a bit before making another video.

Jasper

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #9 on: January 11, 2010, 08:05:46 AM »
your better than me :O

Wis

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #10 on: January 11, 2010, 09:48:23 AM »
For me the biggest problem was a Tody said was the tripod. The quality is great, your tricks are pretty good, and so is your style.
Waiting to see the next one, xD
"The string...the inertia...the hours"

Catjar

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #11 on: January 12, 2010, 10:53:22 PM »
thanks everyone who i didn't already thank.

also my new tripod just arrived so when the time comes for my next video the shots will definitely be more stable

bearges-[}{]

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #12 on: January 13, 2010, 04:19:03 AM »
I really liked your video! The quality is great, the tricks are awesome.. but.. i don't liked that shaking camera. But.. hey! Who cares? You can buy a tripod with, but you can't buy really good diabolo skills.

Jem

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #13 on: January 13, 2010, 11:12:30 AM »
An enjoyable watch. I liked the body / suicide combo around 0.50 and you had a couple of nice slacks there too.

I hope you don't mind me saying that it may be better next time if you perfected your moves (mainly the suicides) before filming for smooth, clean tricks / combos as well reducing thecamara shake!

nutt531

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #14 on: January 13, 2010, 03:07:21 PM »
Yes I think there are some nice ideas in there but you really have to work on your style and fluidity .
Thomas

Crackers

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #15 on: January 13, 2010, 03:35:02 PM »
Nice music choice aswell.

Pakemania

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #16 on: January 21, 2010, 04:58:10 PM »
your better than me :O
You stole my words ::)

Jasper

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #17 on: January 22, 2010, 10:45:44 AM »
which diabolo's he got?

Catjar

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #18 on: January 23, 2010, 03:26:07 AM »
which diabolo's he got?

I just have 2 sundia crystal suns
green and "red" which is actually more pink but whatever

also thanks again for commenting everyone

Catjar

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Re: Watch The Gap
« Reply #19 on: March 11, 2010, 12:04:40 AM »
hey probably no one cares. but I uploaded my video on JTV so here is the link to that.

Juggling.tv - Watch The Gap

 

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