Salut Emmanuel!
woow for me this a real piece of work you got here! First of all, in 1 year of practice you really got a lot of stuff to show on a skill point of view! Plus this a performance video so i assume you didn't show all your skills in it.
Regarding the act itself, I think this a very well thought performance. Was it the first and single time you were performing it?
As I am french, I took the time to watch the first part of the show which for me has a lot of potential. You ve been really able to involve the audience in your story and play with all the events happening (Marcel, the drops etc...). It is very interesting to see that this kind of theatre/skills acts really have a future! I really hope you will push your researches in this kind of act because for me the best performances are the ones in which you communicate people a story, some emotions, some fun! You got all this already!
Maybe the second part was a bit long as you shown already a lot of 2d tricks on the first part but it was not that disturbing.
Continue comme ça mec ça déchire!
Nico